For this term and last term we have been working on an inquiry for ocean pollution where you have been working hard on it we have been making progress a lot some of us are ahead of others but we have been having fun researching and looking on websites about ocean pollution we have been finding disgusting stuff about ocean pollution like 3 billion tons of plastic and rubbish dump into the ocean every 6 month. We have been sharing our ideas on how we are going to Share our ocean pollution work we have been working hard on our topics and what we have to write everyone has been having fun researching and looking on websites to find how this happens. I'll show you some photos that I have found on Google.
Hi my name is Koda from Kawakawa Primary school. I like your work because you've got you D.L.O and you've got a paragraph underneath that. Also because you have two big sentence in your paragraph and one small sentence. I've learnt that pollution is bad because it kills our sea animals
ReplyDeletehi my name Cooper and I'm from Kawakawa primary school your writing is like the best blog post d.l.o and the rubbish because it will kill our animals.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is hirini Im from kawakawaprimary school i really like how you are talking about pollution and how its afecting the moana you are so good at writing.
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