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Friday, August 31, 2018

long write

Hi I read a story about rubbish in the ocean this morning and I want to share it to you.I'd like my Long write about ocean pollution.

long write

Every year there is lots of rubbish getting put in the sea and lots of animals are eating the rubbish and it is not good for them. after a while They swallow some and then they die by choking or getting poisoned or something like that by all the rubbish that they have been eating.This whale has more than 40 plastic bags and loads of other rubbish that has been left in the sea and that's not even half of the rubbish that has been dumped in the sea it's not even a quarter of the rubbish at it mean in the sea. The sea creatures are eating the rubbish for us we need to clean it up ourselves not the sea creatures. Every day that is more and more rubbish getting dumped in the sea we need to stop the people that are dumping rubbish in the sea.It is making the ocean very bad for people animals and other sea creatures. It is making it worse for our pet's anything that is alive including us anything.I think a way to stop it is putting signs up do not put rubbish in the sea and tell everyone that we should not put rubbish in the sea it is bad for the animals and air and us. I think if we didn't have rubbish in the sea there would be much more animals fish and sharks and whales to watch but it is rubbish in the sea so we losing animals everyday. If we lose the rubbish we keep the animals.So it is in a really important thing to Keep rubbish out of the sea. Thank you for reading my long right.I hope you believe me that we can stop rubbish going into the ocean.

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