I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi there Hunter M, my name is Ramsay and I go to St Bernadette's School. I like the way you have explained clearly what you love to do and what you like. I think you and I have a few common interests for example, we both like rugby union, rugby league, Xbox, and scones. Something you could work on is spelling.
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Hi there Hunter M, my name is Ramsay and I go to St Bernadette's School. I like the way you have explained clearly what you love to do and what you like. I think you and I have a few common interests for example, we both like rugby union, rugby league, Xbox, and scones. Something you could work on is spelling.
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