I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi there, my name is Bella and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono__ School. I really like jumping high. It made me think of someone at my old school. He did motorbikes as well.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Hunter. I am Going to say somethings about this and how you have improved.
ReplyDelete1. You keep improving with your writing in class and when you put it on your blog so keep it up.
2. You are thoughtful with your writing when you are making a story and if you stopped you would be a writer when you grow up.
3. KEEP GOING AWESOME DODE.
Hi there, my name is Bella and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono__ School. I really like jumping high. It made me think of someone at my old school. He did motorbikes as well.
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