I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, November 9, 2018
book????
For reading this time we have been working on a book that is called the boy underwater and it is very cool book and it is very interesting to read. There is lots of Cliffhangers at the end of chapters most people don't like it but I like it because it means we can have a more of a surprise the next time we start reading. It is about a boy that has never been swimming before and when he goes swimming for the first time with his class he doesn't tell anyone and he told people that he was the best in the class at swimming so he got to dive in first and then he started to drown and someone had to pull him up from the bottom of the water and then everyone knew that he was not a good swimmer his mum never let him swimming we think because his father died because of swimming and his mother fell asleep so she had to go to the hospital she died so now the kid has to stay at his aunt's house for ever so the person that pulled him up from the swimming pool live right next to his aunties house so they talked and talked he didn't feel like going there anyone from his school because they would laugh.
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That story was cool and You used punctuation.
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