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Tuesday, May 24, 2016

Bomb Alert

Once upon a time there was a
Super villain called Koby who lived in a haunted house.
One day a bomb exploded!         
Everyone woke up.

And so the haunted house fell to  the ground, however the Super villain started to kill people. Then he ran away and then people came after him and everyone died.
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5 comments:

  1. Allan RobertsonMay 25, 2016 at 6:13 PM

    It was fun to work on this story with you Hunter. I do hope your next story may have a happy beginning, middle and end. I know that you love sport so maybe you could write a story about a Super Sports Person. I look forward to reading your next blog post.

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  2. AnonymousMay 26, 2016 at 9:36 AM

    hi hunter i like your Imagination

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  3. AnonymousMay 26, 2016 at 9:38 AM

    hi hunter i like your Imagination

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  4. AnonymousAugust 19, 2016 at 10:48 AM

    Hi there, my name is Harrison and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like your story . It made me think of stories I write.

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  5. AnonymousAugust 25, 2016 at 6:26 PM

    Well done Hunter :)

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